This time we are writing fiction poetry. Remember that the subject is about mystery, which means you have to put your minds in the state of suspense. And as before the rules are two line stanza, where each line should start with the last word(s) of the line before it. You are free to submit as many stanzas as you are intuited to do, rhyming or free verse 😀
Mystery Man
Just a kiss and I’m in bliss
I wondered what else you had in store
Boy, I can’t wait to see where this goes LOL
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Oct 31, 2006 @ 22:46:18
in store of passion everything is possible
there is so much left for us to explore
Oct 31, 2006 @ 22:54:54
explore mysteries of love and romance
the moment I caught your hypnotyzing glance
;p im trying “^_^
Oct 31, 2006 @ 22:57:17
Hmmmm
p.s: I am not playing….just reading
Oct 31, 2006 @ 23:16:38
Excellent, but in the next verses please keep the pronoun “he” and “she”, I will fix what you wrote above now, and you go on, next should start with “his hypnotizing glance”
Shopa
3azeeza wi galyah 🙂
Nov 01, 2006 @ 00:31:26
Your hypnotizing glance had fear and despair
there was more than just love in the air
u said u wanted mystery and suspense…hopefully this will move away from the love theme 😛
Nov 01, 2006 @ 02:15:36
Let me see if I can add a Maltese Falcon touch …
The air was tainted with a strong odor that brought apprehension
within confined surroundings where danger seemed to be waiting
Nov 01, 2006 @ 03:15:57
be waiting in the darkest corners of the earth
and here I thought you were the angel of the hearth
Nov 01, 2006 @ 03:17:26
the hearth that kept me warm and safe
passion led to candle burns I’m leaving this place
Nov 01, 2006 @ 03:22:35
this place and to that
broken mirrors all I see
Nov 01, 2006 @ 03:23:50
I see reflections of myself and I
Imposters of true fear
Nov 01, 2006 @ 08:45:04
true fear crept to my deepest core,
surrounded by smells of blood and gore
Nov 01, 2006 @ 11:55:58
LOL, you guys seem more comfortable with “I”, ok, then in this case I would change mine and also NewMe’s and Butterfly’s to the original stanza they submitted to keep the conformity 😀
Nov 01, 2006 @ 12:05:02
Blood and gore on that basement floor
Was it real or just my imagination!
Nov 01, 2006 @ 12:38:57
I’m gonna shamelessly plagiarize the Temptations and say:
Just my imagination, running away with me.
It was just my imagination, running away with me…
Nov 01, 2006 @ 12:57:46
DA
shame on you, sheeseer lik el6ab6obai 😉
Bas magboolah
Running away with me to a point of no return
In that haunted realm I burned
Nov 01, 2006 @ 13:03:45
Come on, be creative, let your imagination run wild 😉
Nov 01, 2006 @ 15:10:49
I burned your photos and your treasures,
You left, now where will I find pleasure?
Nov 01, 2006 @ 17:00:38
“I’ll stop here cause if I continue this line it will turn out to be triple x rated :P”
Nov 01, 2006 @ 17:37:35
TAT
go ahead make it juicy 😉
Nov 01, 2006 @ 18:52:10
I find pleasure over there
Or is it waaaay down there
“kind of toned down version :P”
Nov 01, 2006 @ 19:00:09
down there I hear there are demons galore
I venture fearless, craving to explore
Nov 01, 2006 @ 19:19:09
To explore the treasure I crave
As a tit for tat enslave
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:26:22
tat enslaved this race
genocidal riders never showing thier face
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:28:07
thier face hidden out of sight
I tighten my grip and scream out of smite
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:32:54
of smite I right with bloody fingers my story
trapped in my mind I see all thier glory
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:35:15
OK, OK; no more copy-n-paste. However, I’ll be “inspired” by the words of Ahmad Shawqi (by way of Muhammad Abdul Wahab):
Enslave or drive me to madness by infatuation
some might frown upon my use of “worship”
ويقول تكاد تجن به فأقول وأوشك أعبده
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:36:03
6ops – I’m late. OK
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:50:24
Thier glory is to set obstacles for me
But ALAS! what do I see
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:51:38
I see that which cannot be seen
A light shimmering at the end of this cave
Nov 01, 2006 @ 20:55:58
” sorry if i’m highjacking. I’m at work and I’m really sick and this is like the only fun thing for me to do 🙂 so from now on I’ll wait for at least 2 ppl to post and I wont double post”
\(TAT)/
Nov 01, 2006 @ 21:26:25
this cave holds her breath
as if she was in deep sleep
Nov 01, 2006 @ 23:19:04
Sleep evades me as I doggedly march on
Into the caves of cobalt and silver
Nov 01, 2006 @ 23:22:32
Silver curtains part to show
the wondrous mystery that lies within
Nov 01, 2006 @ 23:23:15
Within the heart of earth
I hear the throbbing of her heart
Nov 01, 2006 @ 23:24:15
NO! Change that to
Withing the folds of earth
I hear the throbbing of her heart
Nov 02, 2006 @ 01:54:54
her heart calling out my name
but no one understands my pain
Nov 02, 2006 @ 03:37:41
my pain which u loved
keep on hurting u pig
Nov 02, 2006 @ 07:56:06
You pigmented her with blood
As if a horse in your stud
Nov 02, 2006 @ 10:25:33
Stud the ceilings of this cavernous orifice
With glittering, shimmering diamonds
Nov 02, 2006 @ 12:40:06
diamonds are my tears
waiting for some more ?
Nov 02, 2006 @ 22:28:02
Ok guys, I think it’s time to wrap up
Some more to explore what else to get
For my story didn’t start as of yet
The poem should be posted soon, love you all :*
Nov 08, 2006 @ 05:03:50
i love this site 🙂
Nov 08, 2006 @ 21:25:32
Thanks
Janet??