As a rose too fragile to voyage away from its land
She has her whims to ornate the bosoms of beauties, to give
Yet she soon cries tears of petals pleading for her nourishing entities

Her quest for perfection withers
In the hands of detached cruelty
Where she salvages her vanity
In the soils of pampering comfort
Form the unattainable
In the realms of her maturity

She is alone yet never lonely
She is forever in love with the last Romeo
She is but her own rose … entirely


11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Flamingoliya
    Mar 31, 2006 @ 11:44:00

    I loved it.


  2. ScarlO
    Mar 31, 2006 @ 13:26:00

    The last stanza’s so true, i can very much relate to it..


  3. AyyA
    Mar 31, 2006 @ 14:07:00

    You’re so sweet :**

    I guess we all carry some sort of narcissism; it could be interpreted as a defense mechanism 🙂


  4. ولاّدة
    Apr 01, 2006 @ 12:44:00

    قطعة فلسفية
    النرجسية…نعيبها وتسكننا بدرجة معينة..تزداد نسبتها وتقل حسب الظروف
    وتبقى وسيلة دفاعية كما تفضلتي صديقتي

    هل عبرت لك -مؤخراً-عن إعجابي بحكمتك؟
    ها أنذا أفعل الآن


  5. AyyA
    Apr 01, 2006 @ 19:17:00

    As always encouraging. Love you sweetie 🙂


  6. Sedna
    Apr 01, 2006 @ 23:32:00

    I liiiiiike

    And did you notice how good the word “Narcissist” sounds? Narcissist..hehe


  7. Shopaholic Q8eya
    Apr 02, 2006 @ 15:51:00

    AAH! Your words always amuse me my dear ;*


  8. AyyA
    Apr 03, 2006 @ 08:10:00

    Thanks sweetie 🙂

    Stay tuned more coming 🙂
    Missed you girl :*


  9. mosan mosan
    Apr 03, 2006 @ 10:37:00

    Its important to poses a little narcissim dressing up and looking good does make you feel good… Kindly explain more what type of cruelty she is going through..


  10. AyyA
    Apr 03, 2006 @ 11:09:00

    I believe we all demand some standards in our relationships. A narcissist though seems to me a very sensitive person unlike her/his cold exterior impression, looking for perfection in an imperfect world and is constantly disappointed. Cruelty here is the narrator’s perception of the imperfect world around her. The narcissist is a person who needs much more attention and affection than others, but we usually misinterpret her/his needs by the cold, misleading behavior. In comparing the rose’ fragility to other flowers; I’m comparing the high degree of narcissism to human vanity


  11. mosan mosan
    Apr 03, 2006 @ 12:44:00

    xlant explaination …loved it and love the way you think


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