A fantasy

He comes to me;
A broad, massive shoulder,
Tall and lovely in his skin;
The way I love it

His golden rays defy the sun
His youthful body defies the ocean
He comes to my rescue
Only to find himself
Thawed in with me

He touches my hand;
Moist wet fingers
I give him the look
And he gets hooked
Just the way I love it

Now we undress
Now we feel
Now we move
And now, the point is clear
It’s mine and I love it


19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Purgatory
    Apr 21, 2005 @ 20:44:00

    I do not know what to say, or even think of 🙂 I will just close my eyes and imagine 😉


  2. AyyA
    Apr 21, 2005 @ 20:55:00

    Imagination is good 😉


  3. Purgatory
    Apr 21, 2005 @ 21:03:00

    Yeah I have a big imagination 😉


  4. الا نبيذي
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 04:00:00

    الله يسامحك رباب

    القصيدة روعة

    بس ليش الصورة
    حرام عليك انك ارفقتي الصورة معاها
    دمرتي مخيلتي

    الصورة وايد حجمت القصيدة

    اذا تبين رايي شيلي الصورة عشان اللي بدش مدونتك يقرا القصيدة فقط بدون اى مؤثرات

    مرة ثانية
    القصيدة روعة


  5. AyyA
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 07:14:00

    Lol, ok Ila Nabithi I’ll do that 🙂


  6. الا نبيذي
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 08:24:00

    تمام الحين
    على الاقل تخلين القاريء يعطي الف تفسير وتفسير للقصيدة

    على فكرة
    القصيدة قريتها اكثر من 10 مرات

    i love this poetry because its an evoluted poetry ended with explosion


  7. Purgatory
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 09:05:00

    Now you take it away after tormenting me ams in my dreams, I saw everything yellow and blue 😛 I demand compensation for the physical and emotional damage caused to my fragile imagination after reading this post 😛


  8. AyyA
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 09:50:00

    Illa Nabeethi
    Glad you liked it, to be honest with you; I was a bit hesitant to post it 🙂

    I thought you had a big imagination 😉


  9. Purgatory
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 13:37:00

    Yeah big but fragile, needs special attention 😛


  10. DJ
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 19:43:00

    Ooo, la la. Sultry! 😉


  11. AyyA
    Apr 22, 2005 @ 22:57:00

    A little fantasy won’t hurt, what’s yours 😉


    Apr 23, 2005 @ 13:32:00


    It seems you ‘housed’ him instead of him penetrating you. His physical strength, his patriarchial world, and his sexual masculinity were all overshadowed; all envaginated.

    Ohhh, the power of the woman!



  13. Jelly Belly
    Apr 23, 2005 @ 15:55:00

    “Tall and lovely in his skin; the way I love it”
    the way I love it too 😉


  14. AyyA
    Apr 23, 2005 @ 16:58:00

    It amazes me sometimes when women say that they never had a fantasy, come on, are you from Mars, women do have fantasies but they do not talk about them thinking it’s shameful and sin. But I think it is healthy to have a fantasy. It brings color to life.

    You love that for obvious reasons ;), but believe me even the short ones like me prefer them tall with nothing but perfect proportions.


  15. Jewaira
    Apr 24, 2005 @ 20:29:00

    And just the way I love it too 😛
    Hmm now I am wondering about the picture!


  16. AyyA
    Apr 25, 2005 @ 00:24:00

    Hey, the sex goddess herself, you sure you don’t want to add a whip with that? 😉
    I think ella-nabeethi was right, you’re better off without the picture 😉


  17. Kaleidoscope
    Apr 25, 2005 @ 20:58:00


    If the poem possesses any form of S&M or M&S, then leash out the whip and reign in the chaos of seduction! What man would resist that? Let out your anger and anguish. Just don’t over-cuff and over-sensually squeeze! Ouccccchhhhhh. Oh yeah!

    Even manipulation is sexual translation!



  18. The Don ®
    Apr 25, 2005 @ 23:01:00

    All I can say is WOW..


  19. AyyA
    Apr 28, 2005 @ 13:08:00

    S&M or M&S is Jewaira’s department 😉

    The one and only Don


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