Fresh From The Oven

Hey guys give me your opinion about my latest release, because I’m planning to enter a competition with some minor adjustments to this poem;

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Just a plain disposable lighter

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The night we parted you held me gently

And in my palm you placed a lighter

Then in my ear you whispered softly

Keep this….. as the last reminder

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I place my tooth brush in a glass

I keep within my reach

The plastic one you were holding

That night we partied at the beach

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Next to the toothbrush, in the same glass

Another brush “still wrapped” there lay

The one I got you when you were away

But to use, you never had the chance

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And when I open my closet door

Your T–Shirt greets me sadly

The one I got you on my last tour

And you never received; unfortunately

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When I pass the cabinet border

The candle holder winks with class

Not actually a candle holder

But a candle in a crystal glass

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Remember the night you and I

At a friend’s “after party” Slammed

Remember when you winked your eye

As your hand a laptop scanned

Remember the ” Karma Sutra” scene

You scrolled on that screen,

And whispered to my delight

This is what we’ll do tonight

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And remember when we left later

In your hand a crystal glass

This glass is my candle holder

The one that winks every time I pass

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And now you leave me with a lighter

The same plain disposable lighter

Give me something to forget

I don’t need another reminder

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This last token to me symbolized

The acidic defeat of a born fighter

When I finally realized

That I was nothing but a diposable lighter